Feedback ~ 8th January

This was the feedback we received for our main construction which is our music video:

Shooting materal appropriate to task ~ Excellence
Controlled use of camera where appropriate ~ Proficient: Some wobbly handheld shots in places. 
Attention to framing ~ Near Excellence
Variety of shot sizes ~ Near Excellence
Close Attention to mise en scene ~ Proficient 
Editing makes meaning clear ~ Near Excellence 
Selection of shot transition and other effects ~ Near Excellence 
Selection of captions ~ Proficient: Use red and white at the end to mirror the start. 
Recording and editing sound with images appropriately ~ Near Excellence: Lip syncing at the end is a little off. 

Overall Mark: 30/40

From this, we can see what changes we also need to consider when we go back to make the changes that we already knew needed to be made. 

They are as follows: 

• Make sure that the text all matches up and make the end credits match the quote's text from the beginning. 
• Solve the issue of the lip syncing at the end which is slightly out. 
• Bring in the clip from the beginning that is currently offline.
• Fill in the gaps that we have half way through the video.
• Complete the split screens at the end. 
• Bring in more variation on the ages with the clips that we captured over christmas. 
• When getting more footage, try to ensure that the camera is as steady as possible.