Feedback - 9th January

Today, I got feedback for my digipak: 

• Inside of the CD: manipulate text around. 
• Change the colours of the font.
• Change to a consistant font for the artist. 
• Check front image. 

Overall Mark: 5-6/10

What I need to do to improve: 

• Make the text from the inside of the digipak match the outside so that his brand/logo continues. 
• Chose a different image so that they do not look the same at the back and the front. 
• Dont use a long shot for the fron image as i need to sell him as an artist so possibly change it to a close up. 
• Stick to 2 colours in the colour scheme. 
• To show good ICT skills, use the text to curve around with the curve of the CD on the inside. 

My feedback for my website: 

• Awareness of conventions of layout and page design ~ Basic
• Awareness of the need for a variety of fonts and text sizes ~ Proficient 
• Approporiate use of language and register ~ Proficient
• Appropriate use of ICT ~ Basic
• Appropriate intergration of illustration and text ~ Proficient 
• Framing a shot using a variety of shot differences ~ Basic 
• Manipulating photographs as appropriate ~ Basic 

Overall Mark: 5-6/10 

What I need to do to improve: 

• Add more elements so that the page is not so sparse. 
• Look into the layout a little more. 
• Take out the images that were not my own.
• Make the text more visble making it easier to read. 
• Consider the size of the images that I am using. 

Additional Comments: 

• Must be all own original images 
• Lovely Colour scheme and clear tabs
• A bit sparse 
• The text in pink is a bit hard to read and too dense
• Look at the sizes of the images